I think that the revision of intro that the author made for the New York Times publishing was just a more clearly stated thesis of the authors beliefs. I think that for her essay in 'Twenty Something' she was not really giving a clear and consise thesis as much as she was just explaining her lifestlye. With that, her tone seemed like it was one that really didn't care what others thought about her lifestlye.
For the second question, I would have to say that I agree. I have been apart of Myspace and Facebook and I think that Facebook is the healthiest alternative because I feel that it is much easier to connect with people that you actually have withstanding REAL relationships with.
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